Lyrics Deeper - Alternate Version - murphhh

Critiques pass straight through your head but I
Absorb them and use them, yeah I'm a conductor
Your music won't sell cause your songs lack structure
You've got more L's than a driving instructor
Your lyrics are average, delivery horseshit
You're a joke and a stooge, call you Ronnie Corbett
Your bass is mixed poorly, your talent is forfeit
My bass is phatter than Eddie Murphy in Norbit

When did it get dark?
The days feel as if they're getting shorter
And the USS Bismarck
Has once again left German waters

When the verse gets repetitive, I add another instrument
Making music isn't really all that intricate
Musicians are all hacks, They're not that sophisticate
Fuck the Jackson Five, I can beat up that quintuplet
Fuck Elvis too, he had sex with a minor
He's less Johnny Bravo and more Dan Schneider
I wanna shove Madlib in a meat grinder
Can't wait till Morrissey dies, industry lies
And bullshit half-truths make me nervous
Mo' lies, mo' capping - Andy Serkis
Temperature rising like in a furnace
Beads of sweat dripping down my skin's surface
Cause I'm not braggadocios, it's all a facade
The first four verses you can disregard
Cause it's easier to say that the song is great
Than putting in the hours and working hard

The wind spoke in tongues and it pierced my skin
As the seas became alive (became alive)
They lured me in with the promise of sin
And I felt compelled to dive (compelled to dive)

Will the lyrics on the album be too meta?
I want it to be introspective but the execution could be better
Forget a lyrical vendetta
And say what I want to say from the header
Like my mental health problems but they'll get their turn
Music's a good form of therapy or so I've learned
But I know if Mum and Dad hear a track like that
They'll send a WhatsApp message expressing concern
There I go again, downplaying my issues
Cause other people have it worse
I'm not quite comfortable saying it out loud
So the best I can do right now is a verse
Trying to be honest on this album but it's hard to
That's why almost every track thus far has been untrue
Can I be too true to you? Well apparently
Why do you think the album's called this and not transparency?

I felt weaker and weaker
As I was pulled underneath by creatures
I went deeper and deeper and deeper
And deeper and deeper and deeper and deeper

When will their spell break?
My lungs have never felt such constant anguish
And deeper and deeper and deeper and deeper
We're shipwrecked and lost
In this dismal place, left to languish
And deeper and deeper and deeper and deeper

I miss my signs of life, I cannot hear my heartbeat
It's vanished
And deeper and deeper and deeper and deeper
And the USS Bismarck has been left to rot
And we've all been banished
And deeper and deeper and deeper and deeper

I went deeper and deeper and deeper
And deeper and deeper and deeper and deeper (Became alive)
I went deeper and deeper and deeper
And deeper and deeper and deeper and deeper (Compelled to dive)
I went deeper and deeper and deeper
And deeper and deeper and deeper and deeper (Became alive)
I went deeper and deeper and deeper
And deeper and deeper and deeper and deeper (Compelled to dive)